Himanshu:
I’m glad I could be helpful!
Sue
From: Himanshu Sharma <himanshu@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2024 2:26 PM
To: Susan Hares <shares@xxxxxxxx>
Cc: ops-dir@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; spasm@xxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-05
Thanks Susan for your time to review the I-D and providing the feedback.
I will work on the suggestion and update the I-D soon.
On Tue, Apr 9, 2024 at 12:15 PM Susan Hares via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Susan Hares
Review result: Has Nits
Status: Ready with NITs
General Statement: Excellent writing and clearly understood by a novice.
I enjoyed reading the clear ASN.1 syntax in the appendices.
operational summary: The key point is that Clients switching from
[RFC8954] to [draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-06] will want to
use a nonce of length 32, and accept an OCSP of 16 octets.
4 NITS: Main Text (1) Appendix A.1 (1), and Appendix A.2 (2).
Note that NITS are editorial suggestions.
1 NITS in Main Text:
The example in section 2 starts with
30 2f 06 09 2b 06 01 05 05 07 30 01 02 [hex]
Sequence (30) length (2f) {
OBJECT Identifier (06) length (09)
oscpNonce (1 3 6 1 5 5 7 48 1 2 )
It might be good to explain that (1 3) is the 2b.
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#2 NITS in ASN.1 in Section
It would help the ASN.1 reader to explain in a comment
associated with the first usage of "generalizedTime" the format of the
generalized time. It is a well-defined ASN.1 concept, but
the reader is assumed to be an IETF reader with less experience
in ASN.1.
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#NIT 3, use of ATTRIBUTE as an import.
In my review of the ASN.1 in Appendix A.2,
I cannot find a usage of ATTRIBUTE.
If it is not used, why is it included?
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#NIT 4, use of @amp;
ResponseBytes ::= SEQUENCE {
responseType RESPONSE.
&id ({ResponseSet}),
response OCTET STRING (CONTAINING RESPONSE.
&Type({ResponseSet}{@responseType}))}
AcceptableResponses ::= SEQUENCE OF RESPONSE.&id({ResponseSet})
I am not familiar with "&id" or "&Type" or @response.
Please add a comment with the ISO reference for this syntax.
If you wish to be helpful to the reader, it would be
to explain what this syntax means.
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