Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12

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Hi Roni,

Thank you for the review.  Responses inline below.


On 4/8/24 7:26 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

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Document: draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with a nit

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In appendix B2 I noticed that the order of ut/local and standard/wall has
changed comparing to RFC8536 but did not see any mention of the change in
appendix D. Is this on purpose?


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Kenneth Murchison
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