> On Feb 12, 2024, at 21:03, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hi Michael, > > Thank you for your review, > Responses below. > > Kent > > >> On Feb 12, 2024, at 6:36 AM, Michael Tüxen via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Michael Tüxen >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's >> ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written >> primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's >> authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF >> discussion list for information. >> >> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this >> review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC >> tsv-art@xxxxxxxx if you reply to or forward this review. >> >> The document is well written, I only have the following two nits: >> >> * 2.1.5. Guidelines for Configuring TCP Keep-Alives >> It seems that the item list at the end of the subsection provides >> information related to "idle-time", "max-probes", and "probe-interval". >> One item for one leaf, in the given order. >> What confuses me is that the first item contains: >> "but keep-alive messages SHOULD NOT be transmitted more frequently than >> once every 15 seconds" >> For me, this applies to not only to "idle-time" but also to "probe-interval". >> However, for "probe-interval" you provide lower values. >> Using >> "A lower value MAY be configured, but idle intervals SHOULD NOT be smaller >> than 15 seconds. Longer idle intervals SHOULD be used when possible." >> would have avoided this confusion. > > I updated the document to use your text. Thanks for the suggestion! > > >> * Acknowledgements >> The authors would like to thank for following for lively discussions >> should possibly read >> The authors would like to thank the following for lively discussions > > Fixed (in all nine drafts) Thanks for the quick response! Best regards Michael > > >> Best regards >> Michael Tüxen > > > Thanks again, > Kent >
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