[Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-02

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Has Nits

This document retires and obsoletes the Tao of the IETF as an IETF-maintained
document.It includes the rationale for the retirement and the last edition of
the Tao as published via the processdescribed in RFC 6722. I see no operational
or manageability issues with retiring the Tao of the IETF. This document is
READY, but there are some nits. The most obvious one i that Section 2.1 messes
some of the dates and RFC numbers. I suggest the following edit:

OLD:

   The Tao was originally published as [RFC1391] in January 1993.  In
   the following 17 years, four additional versions of the Tao were
   published as RFCs: [RFC1539] in October 1998, [RFC1718] in November
   1994, [RFC3160] in August 2001, and [RFC4677] in September 2006.  In
   August 2012, [RFC4677] was published to document the process for
   publishing the Tao as a webpage so that it “can be updated more
   easily”.

NEW:

   The Tao was originally published as [RFC1391] in January 1993.  In
   the following 17 years, four additional versions of the Tao were
   published as RFCs: [RFC1539] in October 1993, [RFC1718] in November
   1994, [RFC3160] in August 2001, and [RFC4677] in September 2006.  In
   August 2012, [RFC6722] was published to document the process for
   publishing the Tao as a webpage so that it “can be updated more
   easily”.


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