Re: [Last-Call] [netconf] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22

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Hi Lars,

Thank you for your comments.
Please find responses below.

Kent


> On Feb 1, 2024, at 6:38 AM, Lars Eggert <lars@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
> 
> Lars
> 
> 
>> On Jan 22, 2024, at 21:09, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> 
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> 
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
>> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
>> Review Date: 2024-01-24
>> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24
>> IESG Telechat date: ?
>> 
>> Summary:
>> 
>> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.
>> 
>> Note: This review was cursory because this reviewer is ignorant of Yang, and so cannot say anything meaningful about the substance of the document.
>> 
>> NITS: 2
>> 
>> 1) NIT: section 1:
>> 
>> s/references truststore instances./references to truststore instances./

Better - thanks!


>> 2) NIT: section 2.1.3.5
>> 
>> s/containing in inner list/containing an inner list/

Previously fixed already.


Thanks again,
Kent

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