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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-01-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Note: This review was cursory because this reviewer is ignorant of Yang,
and so cannot say anything meaningful about the substance of the document.
NITS: 2
1) NIT: section 1:
s/references truststore instances./references to truststore instances./
2) NIT: section 2.1.3.5
s/containing in inner list/containing an inner list/
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