Hi Dale, all, Please see one comment inline. Cheers, Med > > > On Jan 22, 2024, at 17:46, Dale Worley via Datatracker > <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > > the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > > any other last call comments. > > ... > > Some of the readable data nodes defined in this YANG module may be > > considered sensitive or vulnerable in some network environments. > It > > is thus important to control read access (e.g., via get, get- > config, > > or notification) to these data nodes. These are the subtrees and > > data nodes and their sensitivity/vulnerability: > > > > The use of "These" in the last sentence does not have an unambiguous > > referent as I read it. Perhaps "These subtrees/data nodes have > these > > particular sensitivities/vulnerabilities:" Similar considerations > > apply to the last sentence of: > > > > Some of the operations in this YANG module may be considered > > sensitive or vulnerable in some network environments. It is thus > > important to control access to these operations. These are the > > operations and their sensitivity/vulnerability: > > > > [END] > > [Med] I created a PR to fix this in the RFC8407bis so that this can be fixed for all future YANG modules, not only this one: https://github.com/boucadair/rfc8407bis/pull/34/files. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
