Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-13 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2023-12-11 IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-19 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: Section 3.1: In the description of the d-ACH Sequence Number, it says: ... The originator node MUST increase the value of the Sequence Number field by 1 for each active OAM packet. Since the field is 8 bits, the description should also talk about what happens when 1 is added to 255. (I assume it wraps.) Minor Concerns: General: Based on the Abstract, ACH seems to mean Associated Channel, but other places it seems to mean Associated Channel Header. Please be consistent. Nits: Section 1: s/of active and hybrid, as defined in [RFC7799], OAM methods./ /of active and hybrid OAM methods, as defined in [RFC7799]./ Section 2.1: Some terms have a hyphen between the term and the definition. Others do not. Please use some separator in all cases. Figure 3: s/DetNet Associated Channel Header/d-ACH/ Section 4.1: I cannot parse this sentence: The manipulation makes the identification of the TSN Stream in the intermittent TSN nodes avoids the need to look for the S-Label afterward. Please reword. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
