hi > 1. Abbreviations > Severl abbreviations in the newly added text is better to be expanded > on the first use, including Certification Authority (CA), EE > (end-entity), Certificate Revocation List (CRL) and Autonomous System > (AS). done, i hope > 2. Content seems repetitive > Section 3: > Any particular inetnum: object SHOULD have, at most, one geofeed > reference, whether a remarks: or a proper geofeed: attribute when it > is implemented. If there is more than one, the geofeed: attribute > SHOULD be used. uh, in what way? if the first should is ignored, the second is useful. > Section 4: > If an inetnum: object has both remarks: with geofeed data and also has a > geofeed: attribute, the geofeed: attribute SHOULD be used and the remarks: > ignored ahhh. redundant with that. gotcha. i think we'll keep the first. thanks a lot for the review! randy -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
