Hi Haoyu, Thanks for your review and comments. I changed "the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to" to "the set of BFERs (egress PEs)" - hopefully that is clear. It'll be posted after I make more changes based on other reviews. Thanks. Jeffrey Juniper Business Use Only -----Original Message----- From: Haoyu Song via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Monday, November 20, 2023 7:33 PM To: int-dir@xxxxxxxx Cc: bier@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-bier-evpn.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx Subject: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10 [External Email. Be cautious of content] Reviewer: Haoyu Song Review result: Ready I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments just like any other last call comments. I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication. I+IBk-m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes +ICY For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes +ICY" -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
