Reviewer: Haoyu Song Review result: Ready I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments just like any other last call comments. I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication. I’m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes … For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes …" -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
