Reviewer: Shuping Peng
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft.
Summary:
I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved
before publication.
Comments:
I think this document is basically ready for publication.
Major Issues:
"No major issues found."
Minor Issues:
Where the "C_R" is actually carried is not clear. It would be good if the
following text in Section 3 could be more clear about it, and it might also be
helpful to show the "C_R" in Figure 2. " EDHOC data consisting of the pair
(C_R, EDHOC message_3) required
for completing the EDHOC session. Note that, as specified in
Section 3.2, C_R is transported in the OSCORE Option of the OSCORE
Request rather than in the CoAP payload of the EDHOC + OSCORE
request.
"
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