> On Oct 28, 2023, at 18:02, Jiankang Yao via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Jiankang Yao > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area > Review Team (ART-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > Document: draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03 > Reviewer: Jiankang Yao > Review Date: 2023-10-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-13 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC > > This document is clear and in good shape. > > > BTW, > In section 1, > " > | Implementations that support TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] > | should refer to TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] in Sections 4 > | and 5 of [RFC7589]. > " > > The "|" looks to be odd to me. > > remove "|"? Hi! This is part of the “aside” feature. I guess we could put “NOTE:” in front of it to make it clearer. spt -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
