Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review result: Ready I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area Review Team (ART-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03 Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review Date: 2023-10-28 IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC This document is clear and in good shape. BTW, In section 1, " | Implementations that support TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] | should refer to TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] in Sections 4 | and 5 of [RFC7589]. " The "|" looks to be odd to me. remove "|"? -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
