Thanks for the review, Thomas! I’ve merged your nits PR into our working copy. Best, Tommy > On Aug 15, 2023, at 12:22 AM, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-?? > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review Date: 2023-08-15 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-21 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > This document describes: > * how a server can advertise through DNS that it offers Oblivious HTTP > * how a client can learn the URI to use for the gateway using a well-known URI > * how the gateway's key configuration can be fetched via the well-known URI > > The document is very clearly written with good examples at the right places. > > Applicability and security considerations are thorough. > > The IANA section looks good. > > Major issues: none > > Minor issues: none > > Nits/editorial comments: just a couple, which I packed in a PR. > > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
