Vijay, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Jul 2, 2023, at 22:13, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2023-07-02 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a few > nite. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 1 (please see below) > > Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below) > > Minor > > - Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it may > be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for. > > Nits: > > - Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in your > nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific). > > - Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long. You may consider the following > edit: s/route, by replacing/route. It does so by replacing/ > > - Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/ > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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