Thomas, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review. Lars > On Jun 9, 2023, at 19:01, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14 > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review Date: 2023-06-09 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-06-19 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > The premise is I am not a routing expert and I only had a high level > understanding of segment routing before reading this document. That > said, I have very much enjoyed the clarity and precision of the material > presented and I think the authors have done a really good job, thank > you! (BTW, I have found the terminology section especially useful to > navigate the rest of the draft.) > > The instructions to IANA are concise and clear. > >> From a Gen-ART perspective I reckon the document is ready. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * §1.1, 3rd bullet: s/period/period./ > * §2.1, 4th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/ > * §2.2, 3rd para: s/Again note/Again, note/ > * §2.2, 4th para: s/this document/this document./ > * §2.2, 5th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/ > * §2.2.1, 2nd para: s/contains following/contains the following/ > * §2.2.1, Replication State info model: s/maybe be empty/may be empty/ > * §2.2.1: s/in a SRH. As per psuedo-code/in an SRH. As per pseudo-code/ > * §2.2.2: s/apriori/a priori/ > * §2.2.3: s/this same restrictions/this same restriction/ > * §4: s/catalog/catalogue/ > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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