Reviewer: Jean-Michel Combes Review result: Ready with Nits Hi, I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-22. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Based on my review, the document IS ready to go to IETF Last Call and therefore CAN be forwarded to the IESG The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements) with the document: 3.3.1.3. Host Description Instruction A and/or AAAA records that are not of of sufficient scope to be validly published in a DNS zone can be ignored by the SRP server, which could result in a host description effectively containing zero reachable addresses even when it contains one or more addresses. <JMC> s/... that are not of of sufficient scope .../... that are not of sufficient scope ... </JMC> Best regards, JMC. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
