[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-08

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2023-08-02
IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. In table 1 the allocation for Nil And Max UUID is specified but not in Table
2 (version 0 and 15)

2. In section 5 some of the sun section when the describing the ver field
mention the value while some do not

3. In section 4 first paragraph “ the variant bits in conjunction with the
version bits described in the next sections in determine finer structure.” the
second “in” before “determine” is typo?



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