Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-24

[Adrian Farrel <adrian@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Behcet.

 

The "n.d." is an artefact of xml2rfc. I'll leave that for the RFC Editor to worry about.

 

We could add an abreviations section if anyone feels strongly (I don't, and I'm not looking for extra work :-)

 

Cheers,

Adrian

On 06/07/2023 18:10 BST Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

 

 

Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya

Review result: Ready with Nits

 

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-??

Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya

Review Date: 2023-07-06

IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11

IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

 

Summary:This document is a bis document intended to obsolete RFC3272 that

describes the principles of traffic engineering in the Internet. Since RFC3272

published in 2003 is an informational RFC, this document's status is also set

as informational RFC although it could have been a BCP. The document gives a

nice account of all changes that happened on traffic engineering since the past

20 years. I specifically looked for IPv6, YANG to replace SNMP, SDN,

Virtualization and also Quic and MPTCP in the context of ATSSS, they were all

very well covered. The document is very well written. What I couldn't find are

the coverage of cloud issues, edge computing, data center interconnect which

are just mentioned and identifier locator separation work not even mentioned.

 

Major issues:N/A

 

Minor issues:N/A

 

Nits/editorial comments:

The last two references FT01 and GRPC have n.d. meaning no date?

The document has a nice terminology section 1.4 and most acronyms have been

spelled out but there is no acronyms section

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