Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-?? Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review Date: 2023-07-06 IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary:This document is a bis document intended to obsolete RFC3272 that describes the principles of traffic engineering in the Internet. Since RFC3272 published in 2003 is an informational RFC, this document's status is also set as informational RFC although it could have been a BCP. The document gives a nice account of all changes that happened on traffic engineering since the past 20 years. I specifically looked for IPv6, YANG to replace SNMP, SDN, Virtualization and also Quic and MPTCP in the context of ATSSS, they were all very well covered. The document is very well written. What I couldn't find are the coverage of cloud issues, edge computing, data center interconnect which are just mentioned and identifier locator separation work not even mentioned. Major issues:N/A Minor issues:N/A Nits/editorial comments: The last two references FT01 and GRPC have n.d. meaning no date? The document has a nice terminology section 1.4 and most acronyms have been spelled out but there is no acronyms section -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
