> On 2023-06-14, at 18:20, Carsten Bormann <cabo@xxxxxxx> wrote: > >> consider splitting Section 2 into two or three subsections: >> >> […] > > This is a great idea, except that I’d do the background (your 2.2) before the update (your 2.1). > Now https://github.com/ietf-wg-sedate/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/issues/49 There are now two PRs that can be looked at. (These are stacked PRs, and I don’t know how to do them properly on github:) (#51, add8601-2000, is a prerequisite PR with the necessary references. This also has the fipspub URL.) #52, split-section-2, provides the split into subsections. #53, wordsmith-new-section-4-3, adds replacement text for Section 4.3 of RFC 3339. I’m not sure we should do #53, #52 is sufficient from my point of view. Processed versions are at: https://ietf-wg-sedate.github.io/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/ Source diffs are at: https://github.com/ietf-wg-sedate/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/pull/51/files https://github.com/ietf-wg-sedate/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/pull/52/commits/a69805a3c6b01b64c8e47a416ed5fb44c9046a4c https://github.com/ietf-wg-sedate/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/pull/53/commits/af25372dd347541480a48bc73658b3e97d98b1a4 Feedback welcome! Grüße, Carsten -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
