[Last-Call] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-dynamic-flooding-13

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Reviewer: Susan Hares
Review result: Ready

The document is written in a clear and concise manner.
The authors have done an excellent job of making a difficult subject clear and
readable.

Two technical sections should be checked against implementations of IS-IS with
dense flooding (section 6.6.2.1 and section 6.6.2.2.  I am not implementing so
this check is beyond my capabilities.

Editorial nit:
section 3, requirement 3, sentence 2.  "Just addressing a complete bipartite
topology such as K5, 8 is insufficient."  An informative reference to K5,8 or a
bipartite topology might be helpful to readers.  This is an optional editorial
comment.


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