Michael Welzl <michawe@xxxxxxxxxx> writes: >> On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: >> So to fix this, I recommend that the authors go through the text >> looking for modal words, [...] > > - that seems to be the right way to approach this. It is a very good > suggestion, many thanks. Indeed, while the case you quote is covered > by the API draft, it would be terrible if weâ??d miss any other > requirement there. Fortunately, it sounds like these are all things I would classify as wording issues. But I do apologize for the sheer number of minor changes that you'll have to consider. > As a way forward, my plan is to file issues in our github ( > https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts > <https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts> ) for the smaller things > below, [..] Yes, that's certainly sufficient. I am just a reviewer, and for minor things, I expect nothing more than that the authors consider whether some improvement should be made (or not). Dale
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