Reviewer: Tim Bray Review result: Ready with Nits I am the designated Artart Last Call reviewer for draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03. This document is good; I remember almost nothing about SIP and it was still easy to understand. Nits: - Reading section 1, I wondered what dereferencing a URI with this link type would yield. Following the reference to draft-ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer-07, I eventually found the YANG definition, but I was a little surprised that it didn't seem to register a media type? Now, RFC8288 is careful to decouple link types and media types, but the lack of a media type does feel like a gap. - In the GET example in section 3, maybe a note that the line-breaks & indentation are there for clarity? As presented it's not a valid GET request. - In the security considerations, perhaps a reference to draft-ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer#name-security-considerations would be helpful? -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
