Christer, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Oct 28, 2022, at 23:11, Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-secevent-subject-identifiers-14 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 2022-10-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-17 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document is well structured, and easy to read, but I have an > editorial issue that I ask the authors to address. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: N/A > > Nits/editorial comments: > > The definition of Subject is a little unclear to me. RFC 8417 states that a > subject might be e.g., an IP address, or the issuer of the SET, and that SETs > are used to indicate state changes in the subject. > > draft-ietf-secevent-subject-identifiers-14 gives an example where the subject > is an account, that might be identified using an IP address. From the 8417 > language, I assume the account would be considered "an issuer of the SET". > > Now, does that mean that a SET will be sent if the account change state, but > not if the IP address identifiying the account changes - as the IP address is > not a subject, only a subject identifier? > > I guess what I am saying is that I find it difficult to differentiate between a > subject and a subject identifier, as e.g., an IP address can be both :) > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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