Med,
Thank you very much for the explanation.
It would be nice to add the explanation to the draft.
Linda
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Date: Wednesday, January 4, 2023 at 8:06 AM
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>, gen-art@xxxxxxxx <gen-art@xxxxxxxx>
Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap.all@xxxxxxxx <draft-ietf-opsawg-sap.all@xxxxxxxx>, last-call@xxxxxxxx <last-call@xxxxxxxx>, opsawg@xxxxxxxx <opsawg@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12
Hi Linda,
Thank you for the review.
SAPs can be seen as an abstraction of customer-facing Termination Points (TPs) with specific service provisions. However, a difference between SAPs and TPs is that (1) links are terminated by a single TP, not sets of TPs while (2) an Attachment Circuit can
be terminated by multiple SAPs. Will add a mention about this to draft.
The association between a SAP and a TP is ensured by the following data node:
==
'parent-termination-point': Includes a reference to the parent
termination point to which the SAP is bound. As per Section 4.2
of [RFC8345], a termination point terminates a link in a node. A
termination point can be a physical port, an interface, etc.
This attribute is used, e.g., to associate an interface with its
sub-interfaces as all these interfaces may be listed under the
SAPs of a node. It is also used to link a SAP with the physical
topology.
==
Cheers,
Med
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> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12
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> Review Date: 2023-01-03
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> Summary: The document specifies the YANG data model for the
> Network Service Attachment Points.
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> Major issues: None
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> Minor issues: None
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> It seems to me that the Network Service Attachment Points are very
> similar to Network Termination Points. What are the major
> differences?
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> Thank you
> Linda Dunbar
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