Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-15
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2022-11-23
Result: Ready with Nits
This Standards Track document specifies a lightweight PKI management
operations based on matured CMP (Certificate Management Protocol),
CRMF (Certificate Request Message Format, and HTTP-based or CoAP-based
transfer. The mechanism is operable. This document is well-written
and READY with minor Nits (below) for publication.
Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC 2986
Two obsolete informational references:
RFC 2510 has obsoleted by RFC 4210
RFC 5246 has obsoleted by RFC 8446
Regards,
Sheng
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