On 25/10/2022 20:27, The IESG wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim)
to consider the following document: - 'A Yang Data Model for IGMP/MLD Proxy'
<draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-07.txt> as Proposed Standard
The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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The formatting of this I-D seems a little out w.r.t newlines (an
unsolved problem of the Internet). It was present to a small extent in
-06 but is present more here, as in for example Security Considerations
where the paragraphs starting 'Under...' are double line-spaced.
The examples use an address of 225.0.0 which is reserved and I do not
think should be used. AFAICT there are no multicast addresses reserved
for documentation use - I note that RFC8916 uses 233.252
The YANG module references the Simplified BSD license which should now
be the Revised BSD License (although the tool set is not very helpful here)
s.3.1 and s.3.2 mention that there is a constraint on the upstream
interface to make sure it is not configured to use PIM. The YANG has
'must not' which seems fine but the YANG description clause says 'should
not', which, in IETF jargon, is not the same thing.
Tom Petch
Abstract
This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
configure and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) or
Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) proxy devices. The YANG module in
this document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture
(NMDA).
The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang/
No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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