Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area Directors. Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments. Document: draft-ietf-raw-ldacs-12 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2022-09-08 IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-04 IESG Telechat date: 2022-04-21 This document has already been through IETF Last Call, and it has already appeared in one IESG Telechat. The document has been revised. As a result, this review focuses on the things that changed since the last time that this document appeared on the IESG Telechat agenda. Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: None Nits: Section 1: I found the wording of the sixth paragraph awkward. I suggest: This document provides information to the IETF community about the aviation industry transition of flight guidance systems from analog to digital, provides context for LDACS relative to related IETF activities [I-D.haindl-lisp-gb-atn], and seeks expertise on reliably of IPv6 over LDACS for step (1). This document does not intend to advance LDACS as an IETF standards-track document. Section 4: s/LDACS testbeds and/LDACS, and/ Section 7.3.3: s/defined, however the/defined; however, the/ Section 9.7: s/RFC 9099/[RFC9099]/ -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
