Hi Tom Thanks I have fixed these nits, I have pushed the updates Don -----Original Message----- From: tom petch <daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2022 5:53 AM To: last-call@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs@xxxxxxxx; ipsec@xxxxxxxx; ipsecme-chairs@xxxxxxxx; kivinen@xxxxxx; rdd@xxxxxxxx Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for IP Traffic Flow Security) to Proposed Standard Too late I know but ... YANG import must have a reference clause and a Normative Reference thereof as per RFC8407 which means - 9061 needs adding for the IKE modules - 6991 for the YANG file date and revision date are ood (2022-05-17) contact tools should now be datatracker Simplified BSD License should be Revised BSD License leaf dont-fragment references secton 6.4.1 which does not exist - perhaps 6.1.4 Tom Petch On 14/07/2022 23:30, The IESG wrote: > > The IESG has received a request from the IP Security Maintenance and > Extensions WG (ipsecme) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data > Model for IP Traffic Flow Security' > <draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > last-call@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2022-08-04. Exceptionally, comments may > be sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning > of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document describes a yang module for the management of IP > Traffic Flow Security additions to IKEv2 and IPsec. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs/ > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > IETF-Announce mailing list > IETF-Announce@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce > . > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
