Bernard,
Thank you again. I also added you to the Acknowledgements section after
I temporarily uploaded the diff.
I will hold back from posting a new rev until early next week, to give
my co-author a chance to check it over.
Bob
On 05/08/2022 01:59, Bernard Aboba wrote:
Bob --
Thanks for the thoughtful and thorough response to my review. I have gone
through the changes you suggest, and they look good to me.
On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 4:57 PM Bob Briscoe <ietf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Bernard,
Thank you for taking the time to produce this extremely thorough review.
Pls see [BB] inline;
You will need an HTML email reader for the diffs in this email.
Alternatively, I've temporarily uploaded a side-by-side diff here:
https://bobbriscoe.net/tmp/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-28a-DIFF-27.html
On 30/07/2022 00:51, Bernard Aboba via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Bernard Aboba
Review result: On the Right Track
Here are my review comments. I believe this is quite an important document, so
that making the reasoning as clear as possible is important. Unfortunately,
the writing and overall organization makes the document hard to follow. If the
authors are open to it, I'd be willing to invest more time to help get it into
shape.
[BB] Thank you. You have already obviously sunk considerable time into it
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