Linda, thank you for your review. I have entered a DISCUSS ballot for this document (as a placeholder for IANA). Lars > On 2022-4-5, at 21:18, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-cryptex-05 > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review Date: 2022-04-05 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-05 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This document specifies a new mechanism that completely encrypts header > extensions and CSRCs for RTP. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > a couple of questions: > - Section 4: this document defines a new "a=cryptex" Session Description > Protocol (SDP) [RFC4566] attribute to indicate support. Then the next sentence > states that "This attribute takes no value". Why "no value"? The first > statement already says a new "a=cryptex" attribute. It is confusing. > > - Section 6.3: what does "region" mean in the statement? "The decryption > procedure is identical to that of [RFC3711] except for the region to decrypt" > Do you mean the "header" to be encrypted by the scheme described in this > document? > > Thank you, > Linda Dunbar > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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