Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-cryptex-05 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2022-04-05 IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-05 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document specifies a new mechanism that completely encrypts header extensions and CSRCs for RTP. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: a couple of questions: - Section 4: this document defines a new "a=cryptex" Session Description Protocol (SDP) [RFC4566] attribute to indicate support. Then the next sentence states that "This attribute takes no value". Why "no value"? The first statement already says a new "a=cryptex" attribute. It is confusing. - Section 6.3: what does "region" mean in the statement? "The decryption procedure is identical to that of [RFC3711] except for the region to decrypt" Do you mean the "header" to be encrypted by the scheme described in this document? Thank you, Linda Dunbar -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
