Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a Yes ballot for this document. Lars > On 2022-1-20, at 21:10, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2022-01-20 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-25 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: A well written document ready for publication. It has couple of very > tiny nits that could usefully be addressed. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > ALPN is not well known and should be expanded on first use. It would be useful > to note that “doq” is a string. This is clarified below, but it is proposed > that that text be removed. > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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