Vijay, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2022-1-11, at 20:48, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2022-01-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: 1 > > In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/ > (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]). > [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/ > > Thanks, > > - vijay > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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