Hi Vijay,
Thanks for the comment. I've addressed the issue with https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/1887 and will push a new revision of the draft soon.
Cheers,
Ryan
On Tue, Jan 11, 2022 at 10:51 AM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2022-01-11
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
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Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 1
In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/
(Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
[1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/
Thanks,
- vijay
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