Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-datagram-07

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Hi Jurgen,

Thanks for the review! I've filed a PR to address your comment, here: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/74

Best,
Tommy

On Dec 13, 2021, at 1:07 AM, Jürgen Schönwälder via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Reviewer: Jürgen Schönwälder
Review result: Ready

This is a very clear and well written document. I believe it is ready
to be published. I spotted only one minor editorial issue in the
security considerations:

  [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
  distinguished from other frames using the different response
  to loss.

The phrase "connections might be distinguished from other frames"
feels a bit odd. How about this instead:

  [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
  distinguished from other connections due to their different
  response to frame losses.

/js



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