[Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-datagram-07

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Reviewer: Jürgen Schönwälder
Review result: Ready

This is a very clear and well written document. I believe it is ready
to be published. I spotted only one minor editorial issue in the
security considerations:

   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
   distinguished from other frames using the different response
   to loss.

The phrase "connections might be distinguished from other frames"
feels a bit odd. How about this instead:

   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
   distinguished from other connections due to their different
   response to frame losses.

/js


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