Gyan, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-10-24, at 3:45, Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Gyan Mishra > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-?? > Reviewer: Gyan Mishra > Review Date: 2021-10-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-10-27 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This draft analyzes the overall framework of network telemetry technologies > that exist today and future evolution of telemetry technology and data > gathering from a control plane, data plane and management plane perspective. > Document is well written. > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > None > Nits/editorial comments: > > Section 4.1.3 Forwarding plane telemetry does not include STAMP RFC 8762. > Mention traditional non OAM based ping ICMP Echo snd Echo-Reply. > > Also for OAM based maybe list the variety of OAM based ping such as for all > data planes such as MPLS, RSVP-TE, L2 VPN pdeudowire OAM ping VCCV (Virtual > Circuit Connection Verification) RFC 5085 RFC 7189, RFC 5586 GACH PW OAM. > > Any of the RFCs listed here maybe include as informative references. > > Also NVO3 VXLAN and BIER OAM. SFC service plane RFC 8924 SFC OAM. > > Also DETNET forwarding and service sub planes DETNET OAM. > > SDN and SD-WAN, PCEP, BGP all centralized controller based architecture can > also be used for network telemetry. > > RESTCONF REST API is missing should be mentioned > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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