Hi Michael, Catherine, Catherine -- thanks for the review! Michael -- thanks for the proposed text. It's certainly better than nothing, and we could iterate further if needed. In particular, I wonder if we actually want to duplicate some of the considerations from RFC 3986 that also apply to XML references, such as the lack of a stability guarantee that fetching the referred-to resource will actually produce the same results over time and for all entities that might be performing the fetch operation. Thanks, Ben On Mon, Nov 08, 2021 at 11:55:05AM -0500, Michael Douglass wrote: > > On 10/26/21 14:49, Catherine Meadows via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Catherine Meadows > > Review result: Has Issues > > > > This draft describes increases the expressive and scope of relationships that > > can be defined in iCalendar. It updates the already existing RELATED-TO by > > allowing UID and URI as values and introduces a GAP parameter to specify the > > length of time between two events. It also introduces three new properties: > > CONCEPT (roughly, category), LINK (typed reference to external meta-data or > > related resources), and REFID(used to identify a key that identifies all > > components that use that REFID). The syntax of the relationships is given and > > intended use cases are described. > > > > The introduction of greater expressiveness does not by itself introduce > > security considerations, but the introduction of references to external sources > > does, specifically for URIs, which are allowed as arguments of the RELATED-TO, > > CONCEPT, and LINK properties. The authors of this document are aware of this, > > and refer the reader to [RFC3986] for more information. I agree that the > > security considerations related to use of URIs proposed in this draft are > > covered by this RFC. > > > > I wonder though, if the document shouldn’t concern a similar warning about the > > data type REFERENCE. This refers to an XML document or a portion of an XML > > document. Since XML can also be used as an attack vector, a mention in the > > Security Considerations Section would seem appropriate. > > I agree with the sentiment. I thought it would be easy to find a > document with such a section - however the XML spec itself doesn't have > a security section. There is at least section 20.6 in RFC4918 (WebDAV) > which talks about external entities. Perhaps something like this: > > When the value is a REFERENCE type the targeted data is an XML document > or portion thereof. Consumers need to be aware of the security issues > related to XML processing - in particular those related to XML entities. > See RFC4918 - Section 20.6 > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > secdir mailing list > secdir@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir > wiki: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/sec/wiki/SecDirReview -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call