>>> Catherine Meadows via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> schrieb am 27.08.2021 um 22:01 in Nachricht <163009446578.19033.10956390674873739814@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: ... > 2. I had trouble interpreting the following sentence: > > The > NTP state needs to be protected not only between the reception and My guess is that "protected" (prevent access) actually means "preserved" (kept for later reading) here. > transmission in order to send the peer a packet with a valid origin > timestamp, but all the time to not lose the timestamps which will be > needed to complete a measurement when the following packet in the > interleaved mode is received. > > It took me a while to see that what you were saying was NRP state needs to > be > protected not only between the reception and transmission … , but all the > time > … . The sentence is so long and carries so much information that I lost the > sense of the structure halfway through. It would be better to break it down > into shorter sentences, e.g. start with “NRP state needs to be protected not > only between the reception and transmission, but all the time.”, and then go > into the reasons. > > > > _______________________________________________ > ntp mailing list > ntp@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ntp -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
