Hi Ines,
Thank you for your review. The authors are reviewing the feedback and plan to update shortly.
Thank you,
Sarah (Doc Shepherd)
> On May 24, 2021, at 9:24 AM, Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2021-05-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
>
> This document defines methodologies for benchmarking Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and
> Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) performance. This document is
> Informational. No major issues found.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - Check punctuation, some sentences do not start with space after period. e.g.
> page 16 "... sample.The time ..." - Some paragraphs do not start with
> upper-case letter. e.g. page 10, "confirm the DUT..." - I would expand PBB-EVPN
> the first time used. Perhaps in the introduction, "Provider Backbone Bridging
> EVPN (PBB-EVPN) is defined in RFC 7623, discussing how can be combined with
> EVPNs to provide a new/combined solution...."
>
> Thank you for this document,
>
> Ines
>
>
>
> _______________________________________________
> bmwg mailing list
> bmwg@xxxxxxxx
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bmwg
--
last-call mailing list
last-call@xxxxxxxx
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
