On 30 Jun 2020, at 7:24, Stewart Bryant wrote:
On 29 Jun 2020, at 18:30, Pete Resnick via Datatracker
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Minor issues:
It is not clear to me why this is being sent for Informational
instead of
Proposed Standard. The shepherd's writeup does not justify it, and in
fact the
writeup refers to the document as a "specification", which is exactly
what it
appears to be. It defines the use of SFLs, describes how they are
processed by
the endpoints, describes how they are aggregated, etc. While the
document may
not be standalone, I don't see how it's really an Informational
document. I
suggest restarting the Last Call for Proposed, and if for some reason
it needs
to be Informational, it can always be downgraded after Last Call.
Pete - the “tradition”...
I hear songs from "Fiddler on the Roof" in my head...
...in routing is that such documents are Informational and the
detailed protocol specifications are standards (there are a couple of
those in progress about to finish baking). I leave it up to our AD to
pass judgement on the matter as this is a simple fix, but I don’t
think the changed status is REQUIRED.
Absolutely agreed that it is not required, but given that this does
contain specification, and how much less scrutiny is given to
Informational document as against Standards Track (see, for example, the
IESG balloting rules on each), Standards Track seems more sensible. But
the world remains intact either way.
The Security Considerations section says, "The issue noted in Section
6 is a
security consideration." I'm not sure I understand why that is.
Section 6 explains the privacy considerations, and privacy and
security are close friends so I cross referenced the section rather
than repeating it. I suggest that we wait to see what SECDIR wants to
do before changing any text.
Yes, glad to defer to SECDIR on this.
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1: "(see Section 3)" seems unnecessary.
I can take that out on the next version, it was intended as a forward
reference to a completely new contract in MPLS.
Section 3: I thought the "Consider..." construction made those
paragraphs
unnecessarily wordy and a bit harder to follow.
I will reword the first two sentences para 2 of section 3 to simplify
the language.
Thanks. As I said, both very minor things.
Thanks for the comments
My pleasure. Thanks for your quick followup.
pr
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