Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Has Nits
I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
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treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.
Document: draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2020-06-18
IETF LC End Date: 2020-07-02
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Has Nits
Major Concerns:
None.
Minor Concerns:
Section 3.4 includes:
V6ONLY_WAIT The minimum time the client SHOULD stop the DHCPv4
configuration process for. MUST be no less than
MIN_V6ONLY_WAIT seconds. Default: 1800 seconds
The second sentence should include a subject; and "MUST NOT" seems like
a better wording to me. I suggest:
V6ONLY_WAIT The minimum time for which the client SHOULD stop
the DHCPv4 configuration process. The value MUST NOT
be less than MIN_V6ONLY_WAIT seconds.
Default: 1800 seconds.
Nits:
Section 2: s/seems only natural/seems natural/
Section 3.3.1: s/for V6ONLY_WAIT second/for V6ONLY_WAIT seconds/
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