Separately, two more YANG quirks
The augment have no conditional - rather the YANG 'when' is one level
down on the container, not something I am used to nor the practice in
other pim yang.
YANG must be plain text - [RFC 4541] looks like a markup
Tom Petch
On 10/06/2020 12:44, tom petch wrote:
The RPC to clear the tables are somewhat insecure. The default is to clear all so a mistake in entering a valid address will clear everything. It would be more secure to have an explicit option for clear all.
The RPC to clear the tables has no restrictions; a NACM deny all might be appropriate
RPC or ACTION? the latter may be suitable.
RFC5790 is referenced by the YANG module but is not in the I-D References
feature feature* is unusual; that an identifier is a feature is usually apparent from the context in which the identifier is used and so including 'feature' in the name is redundant
And to state the obvious the formatting lacks leading spaces which will doubtless get fixed some time.
Tom Petch
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Abstract
This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast
Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping devices. The YANG module in this
document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang/
No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
rfc4541: Considerations for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping Switches (Informational - IETF stream)
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