Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2020-05-16 IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-25 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC Major issues: This document says it is Informational. It says it describes "a" capport architecture. But the third paragraph of the introduction says that this document standardizes an architecture. The rest of this review assumes that is an error, and this is describing "an" architecture, rather than "the IETF" architecture. Minor issues: The abstract really should expand "capport". As simple as having the first sentence read "This document describes a "captive portal" (capport) archtiecture." Nits/editorial comments: Following the first bulleted list in the introduction, the document reads: "this document does not yet describe...? The word "yet" seems inappropriate. We are pbulsihgin this as an RFC. Please remove the "yet". -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
