Thanks Magnus,
Please see my comments in-line.
Gorry
Magnus Westerlund wrote:
Hi,
Some comments on the new draft:
Section 2.2.1: One of the bullets is missing an "a" to read "At the time
..."
Will be fixed.
Figure 2: Is the figure really correct with the listen' state. Does it
really take two receive request events to go from invited to Respond?
Seems that the Invited to Listen' (receive request) should go directly
to Respond?
>
It wasn't the intention to imply two receptions were required, since the
text says that INVITED->LISTEN' is triggered by a DCCP-Request, and then
causes immediate transition to RESPOND.
I don't know how best to reflect this in the figure, so I'll suggest a
footnote. Better ideas are most welcome!
Proposed new diagram:
unspecified remote +--------+ fully specified remote
+---------------------| CLOSED |---------------------+
| +--------+ send DCCP-Listen |
| |
v v
+--------+ timeout +---------+
| LISTEN | +---+-----------| INVITED |
+--------+ | | +---------+
| | | 1st / 2nd ^ |
| more than 2 | | retransm. | | receive
| retransmissions | +-------------+ | Request
| | resend Listen v
| | +---------+
| +-------------->| LISTEN' |
| +---------+
| |
| receive Request +---------+ receive Request* |
+------------------->| RESPOND |<--------------------+
send Response +---------+ send Response
* Note: A server that responds a DCCP-Request in the INVITED state,
transitions to the LISTEN' state and then immediately transitions to the
RESPOND state. This does not require reception of an additional
DCCP-Request packet.
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Section 2.2.3: Should that have a section title?
Indeed:
Protocol Method for DCCP Client Endpoints
Otherwise I think the changes looks ok, although I haven't read them in
super detail nit-picking mode.
Cheers
Magnus Westerlund
IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair
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