Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-dccp-simul-open-06.txt

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Hi,

Some comments on the new draft:

Section 2.2.1: One of the bullets is missing an "a" to read "At the time
..."

Figure 2: Is the figure really correct with the listen' state. Does it
really take two receive request events to go from invited to Respond?
Seems that the Invited to Listen' (receive request) should go directly
to Respond?

Section 2.2.3: Should that have a section title?

Otherwise I think the changes looks ok, although I haven't read them in
super detail nit-picking mode.

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair
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