Hi, Some comments on the new draft: Section 2.2.1: One of the bullets is missing an "a" to read "At the time ..." Figure 2: Is the figure really correct with the listen' state. Does it really take two receive request events to go from invited to Respond? Seems that the Invited to Listen' (receive request) should go directly to Respond? Section 2.2.3: Should that have a section title? Otherwise I think the changes looks ok, although I haven't read them in super detail nit-picking mode. Cheers Magnus Westerlund IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@xxxxxxxxxxxx ----------------------------------------------------------------------
