On Fri, Apr 15, 2011 at 17:41, Michael Witten <mfwitten@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Mon, 11 Apr 2011 06:31:30 +0000, Michael Witten wrote: > >> I did some copyediting whilst looking through udev/udev.xml; >> this email contains a pull request as well as the inlined >> diff of all the changes squashed together. >> >> The changes apply cleanly to 960250952193db522b8ced336bf998bd7e8e4a31: >> >> Â selinux: firmware - do not label files in runtime dir (2011-04-08 03:08:16 +0200) >> >> and are available here: >> >> Â git://github.com/mfwitten/udev.git docs/udev.xml >> >> Squash them if desired. >> >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Offset daemon name with commas >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Remove commas (and unnecessary repetition) >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `are' -> `is'; the subject is `Access' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Use present tense >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clarification through proper wording >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `;' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `key value' -> `key-value' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `:' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Use `assignment' consistently >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Remove unnecessary repitition >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Add a few more words for context >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Use `unless' for clarity >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clarify PROGRAM key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `a shell style' -> `shell-style' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean `*' description >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean character range description >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of NAME assignment key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of SYMLINK assignment key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of ENV assignment key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of RUN assignment key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of LABEL assignment key >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Add missing `.' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `which' -> `content of which' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `commandline' -> `command line' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up WAIT_FOR description >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `a' -> `the' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clean up introduction to substitutions. >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Use normal sentence structure >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Actually make a separate paragraph >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Add comma >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `char' -> `character' >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Clarify through a change in word ordering >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Improved word order >> Â Â Â Docs: udev.xml: Fix dangling modifier >> >> Âudev/udev.xml | Â169 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------- >> Â1 files changed, 86 insertions(+), 83 deletions(-) >> >> [diff] > > Would someone like to commit this? Good news! These patches still apply cleanly to the latest master: 2906cbbae4d97291c1cfc456cf132726fffd8fc0 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-hotplug" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
